Okay, obviously you have a LOT of talent. But Tiger lily herself is just downright 'off'. Compared to the other two characters who have way more energetic and realistic poses and expressions, the fabrics of their clothing feels way more natural and are just perfect, she is just boring to look at. Sexy, but boring.
She doesn't have the same interesting shading which makes her look flat and radioactive, her face is cookie cutter and boring, the fabrics are so tight you can see any tiny detail extruding, but is thick enough to have deep wrinkles and stitches? And she's not as much sitting in the boat, as she's floating slightly above it. Also, it looks like her shins are broken, lower legs don't bend that way.
It's really sad to see that the real talent and skill is pushed to the background, just to add to sex appeal.
And I can't draw like this, so feel free not to point that out. But these are such basic and stupid errors, even worse, they are deliberately made. And it's just impossible to not notice them.